Thursday, May 13, 2021

hansel and gretel


hi in wrriting we have been learning about fairyttales






Hansel and gretel once up time there lived a hot house. Hansel  and gretel had a stepmom and they had to do the chores. They had to run hansel and gretal run to the woods day poot a crumb to not gat lost hansel and gretel see a witch house they went to run to eat the house. Witch opan the door the hansel and gretel went anxiety the witch house.the witch said came an gretel and hansel wen to the witch house hansel wos stuck in a cage.the witch fell hansel and gretel pushed the witch and hansel and gretel the end.  

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3 comments:

  1. Miss GoslinMay 13, 2021 at 3:47 PM

    Hi Mahdia, well done with getting your writing onto your blog. You have worked really hard on your retell. Sit with me tomorrow and I can help you move all your writing into the middle of the page. Did you enjoy the story?
    -Miss G :)

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  2. AnonymousMay 14, 2021 at 11:51 AM

    hay there i'm Emma my favorite part of your post was that it was good I was interested to read it when you did that did you get all your corrections right

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  3. Mrs RussellAugust 18, 2021 at 11:56 AM

    Hi Mahdia, thank you for putting your work on your blog. I like the ginger bead house in,yum, Hansel and Gretel. Next time maybe you could get some help to center it on the screen.
    - Mrs Russell

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